Adam

One day my friend Larry and I went to the local park.We started to play football.Then we heard some music. We wondered where it was coming from. We moved in the direction we thought it was coming from.We saw something moving.It looked like a tree.”Are we dreaming”? I asked Larry.”I don’t think so”,replied Larry.As we got closer we realised  they were people dressed up like trees.They were great at dancing. They were completely synchronised .We were amazed.Well, at least I was.We asked if we could dance with them.They let us.We were nowhere near as good as them but it was great fun.

2 thoughts on “Adam

  1. You have built up the story very well and if I hadn’t seen the prompt I would be really wondering what would come next . Good spelling and punctuation. Maith thú! Esther

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