John and Tom were going to the strange house down the road.When they got there chills went down their spines. They slid through the half open door.The floor was creaking each step they took.They heard the door shut with a bang. John shone his his torch at the door. They started running down the corridor .They stopped for a break. Suddenly a drop of slime drops on Tom. The slime dripped through the roof’s holes.They looked back .There was a wall of slime .They were trapped .John was suddenly dragged into the darkness .Tom curled up into a ball.He was all alone.
Very good story this week Conor. Good use of adjectives. Keep up the good work. Maith thú!