Once upon a time there was a little girl ,called Sophie, who really longed for a pet goldfish but her mother would not allow her get one. She then asked if she could have a bird that could fly high. Her mam asked, “but what would happen if it flew out and onto the roof”? Sophie answered, “I would get a ladder, climb up and get it down”.”What ladder would you use “? asked her mam. ” The brown one , of course”. ” What would happen if you fell”? continued her mam. ” I would climb the ladder very slowly”, replied Sophie.
An-mhaith Aoibhín. You wrote a very good story this week, Aoibhín. Most of the piece is in the form of a conversation and you have used quotation marks very well. You did not overuse the word “said”. Spellings and grammar excellent. Lean leis an dea-obair.Esther
Hi Aoibhin,
I enjoyed reading your story. Well done.
I like what you have done with this week’s 5 words. The dialogue between the girl and her Mam works well.
Good work this week.
Mrs Boyce (Team 100WC)
Cork.
Ireland
https://mrsboycesclass.100wc.net/