I went to my cousin’s birthday party on Saturday.I cycled to the party. When I got there a man from Dave’s Jungle was there . He had a tarantula , a snake and a rabbit and many more cool animals as well . Before I went my cousin kindly asked if I wanted to stay in his house.I played all night and day but then I looked at the clock and it was time to go to bed. I went to my bed and suddenly I pulled out my tooth and red blood flowed out .
Hi Esther,
There is a very dream-like quality to your writing, with the juxtaposition of pleasant, every day images (rabbits, cycling, kindly cousins) with the darker imagery of spiders and snakes and blood flowing from your mouth – I really love the effect this has on me when I am reading; it makes me feel kind of uncomfortable, but in a way that grips my attention and excites my imagination!
Thank you for entering the 100WC!
Best wishes,
Mel Wells (Team100)