Ava m

On Wednesday morning at 09:00 we went to the bus to play basketball matches. Our  school’s name is S.t Anne’s primary  school.We  arrived at the first school. Their mascot was a mouse. It was on their gear.We arrived at the next school. Their mascot was a bull.We won by 20-18. The very last school had a very weird mascot. It  was a hand.  I saw the hand on top of their school.It was a close match, 18-14 to us.We arrived back  at school. It was a long day.

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  1. Hi Ava,
    Thanks for this piece of writing. You have some really good ideas and at the moment have presented it rather like a report, perhaps for a newsletter, all the main facts : who, what, why, where and when!
    I really like 1st person stories (using I, we, us, our) as we can really see what someone is feeling and this would be my tip for next time.

    Debbie Team100, Bristol, ENgland

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