Emma-Jane

Hungry Jim

Once upon  a time there was a lad called Jim who loved food  was often very hungry.So he made himself  a sandwich  with white bread and he filled it with lettuce, onions and cheese. Then to add flavour he added mayonnaise and finally popped it into the toaster.He gulped down the sandwich which made him very eneregetic.  He now felt full of beans and couldn’t stop running.He hurried out to the garden and saw  something unusual. He wondered what it could be. It was a battery rolling around like sausage .It rolled until it ran out of power.

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  1. Well done Emma-Jane! Your story was very visual! I particularly like your phrases ‘to add flavour’ and ‘full of beans’. I would love to know what other mischief he might get up to with all that extra energy!!

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