It was a bright summer’s day in Ireland, however there were some clouds in the sky . I always sneak across a field that is full of wildlife: pigeons, foxes, rabbits and pheasants, so today I snook gingerly across the field and discovered a remarkable thing . I would have never imagined it in my whole life.It was a big yellow pot filled with jewels and gold coins but then I heard a little voice saying: ” hey you! Get away from my pot of gold.” I turned and saw him. I ran as fast as I could and never went back again .
An-scéal an tseachtain seo Sophie. I love your references to Ireland: the weather and the leprechaun. Did you get the idea of the field full of wildlife from Danny the Champion of the World? Deep up the good work.
Hi Sophie!
I really liked your story because you were being specif like “It was a bright summers day in Ireland.” I like how you used adjectives like how you said I ran fast.
Great work!
From Emily.
Here is a link from my 100 word challenge.
http://learningglobally.global2.vic.edu.au/2017/03/04/the-wooden-haunted-house-100wc-week-23/
Australia, Melbourne