Once upon a time, there was a man called Jeff walking through the mysterious local park.The local park was rumoured to be haunted but Jeff didn’t believe in ghosts or anything like that. Although, his friends did and Jeff was there to prove them wrong.Everything was ordinary until a group of stick-like brown men jumped out of the branch of a tree. Startled, he ran for a hiding spot just finding one in time before the stick men walked past. He was going to take a picture but then he remembered what he wanted to prove to his friends. Then he realised that the men were chasing him and he was never seen again.
Hi I hope Jeff is ok He must of got a HUGE fright . Good story based on him it is short but good.
poor jeff he was so young !!!:( was the story based in japan ? Your story was great .
Wow poor Jeff.Great story.Keep writing.
Hi Eoghan, I wonder what happened to Jeff. I wonder was he turned into one of those mysterious ‘Stick Men’. I’d love to know more. Well done!