My father has a secret and I ask him everyday,
Oh! please father please, just tell me once this day
I went to bed early thinking about his dreaming.
I heard a big crash and lots of screaming.
I called for my dad but didn’t hear a sound,
Went down to check and saw Nanny’s old lamp
lying on the ground.
And two little figures and lots of tiny shapes.
It’s probably just Seáiní pretending he’s in space.
I heard the door bang.
I found out that Seáiní got grounded ,
It’s a long story
But for now I have to GO.
Maith thú, Síofra. You wrote a very interesting poem in response to the picture prompt. Very good writing for the beginning of 4th class and your first attempt at the 100WC.
Well done Siofra. I like the rhyming words!
Well done. Síofra I really liked your poem
Well done Síofra. I really liked your poem.