One day I went out for a walk and I saw a sign that said “Do not cross”, so I did and I saw a big light bulb and two scientists trying to figure out what had happened. I saw lots of gems and they were really pretty so I touched the bulb . It was really hot .I screamed and I burnt my hand. One of the scientists looked at me so I ran home ,put my hand under cold water and then I went straight up to bed and fell straight to sleep .
Hi Lilly,
I think that might be a lesson on obeying signs! Your story flows nicely and there is just enough happening to make it easy to follow.
Miss T
Team 100wc
Hi Lilly,
This story is really good, well done! I really enjoyed reading this.
LOTS of LOVE
Emer
well done lilly you should be a writer when you grow up