lilly

One day I went out for a walk and I saw a sign that said “Do not cross”,  so I did and I saw a big light bulb and two scientists trying  to figure out what had  happened.  I  saw lots of gems and they were really  pretty so  I touched the bulb .  It was really hot .I  screamed and I burnt my hand. One of the scientists looked  at me so  I ran home ,put my hand under cold water and then I  went straight up to bed and  fell straight to sleep .

3 thoughts on “lilly

  1. Hi Lilly,

    I think that might be a lesson on obeying signs! Your story flows nicely and there is just enough happening to make it easy to follow.
    Miss T
    Team 100wc

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