Mum was preparing dinner when she noticed she had no carrots. She checked under the press but she only had one , so dad went to the shop to get some. When he got there he saw two little boys. One was quite tearful , he had been messing around with steel and it was stuck in his hand. It was turning a mauve colour. Dad was very concerned and brought the boy home to his parents . They had to bring him to the hospital to have surgery on his hand. He had to get ten stitches and was kept in overnight.
Hi Erin, great story, I really like the way you have used the prompt words to describe the boy’s injury. I also like how you have been very careful with your punctuation. Well done!