Mum was preparing dinner when she noticed she had no carrots. She checked under the press but she only had one , so dad went to the shop to get some. When he got there he saw two little boys. One was quite tearful , he had been messing around with steel and it was stuck in his hand. It was turning a mauve colour. Dad was very concerned and brought the boy home to his parents . They  had to bring him to the hospital to have surgery on his hand. He had to get ten stitches and was kept in overnight.

One thought on “Erin100

  1. Hi Erin, great story, I really like the way you have used the prompt words to describe the boy’s injury. I also like how you have been very careful with your punctuation. Well done!

Leave a Reply

Your email address will not be published. Required fields are marked *